Thursday, September 24, 2009

Vanessa.

Tied with a rope of a thousand screams
Vanessa pleads, Vanessa screams, Vanessa get on her knees.
She's losing her mind, catching her breath.
What will she do when he gets back with that net?

Vanessa loves him not, he knows this now.
She'll cry, she'll scream, she'll pay for what she's done.
She knows now she can't do this to Satan's son.

She flips and she flaps trying to run,
Oh but she knows she can't outrun his gun.
Brought down by bullets to quick to see,
Vanessa pleads one more time on her fuckin' knees.

Vanessa loves him not, he knows this now.
She'll cry, she'll scream, she'll pay for what she's done.
She knows now she can't do this to Satan's son.

Standing over his dear Vanessa he starts to cry.
She's not moving, she's not pleading, she's ready to die.
Wiping his eyes, he raised his gun pulling the trigger,
The deed was finally done.

She knows now she can't do this to Satan's son.
Goodbye Vanessa.

2 comments:

  1. I think the last line should just be goodbye instead of bye bye aha sorry im picky but besides that i really liked it :)
    Very cool, very dark of course.
    I really like the first part :))
    Or the last
    it's very cool.
    I can picture it perfectly in my mind haha like a music video mode

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  2. i liked it
    a lots
    i really want to hear how it would sound
    i think itd be amazing

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